Thursday, December 31, 2009

Staking Claim by Crishelle Pierce


Title: Staking Claim

Author: Chrishelle Pierce

Publisher: Breathless Press

Publication Date: 2009

ISBN: 978-1-926771-19-9

Genre: Erotic contemporary

Length: 4 pages

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Rating: 1.5 Diamonds

Heat Level: Erotic

Other: masturbation

Reviewer: Jillian Carroll

Date: 12/31/09


Blurb: Gina knew the moment her husband grasped her firmly that was filled with lust, but was it lust for her or for someone else?


Not sure where to begin with this review but even the blurb is poorly written. Staking Claim had great potential to be a quick, highly erotic read but quickly fizzled into a boring story completely told in narrative, passive writing. If the sex on a bathroom counter is so mind-blowing, internal thoughts are a must but rather, I felt like I was watching an insecure woman and detached husband go at it instead of feeling part of it. Best part of this story was the beautiful cover and that warranted part of the rating. I could go on but instead simply suggest readers find a different erotic quickie story to spend their money on.

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