Friday, August 6, 2010

Untouched Places by Grace Meadows

Title: Untouched Places

Author: Grace Meadows

Publisher: Decadent Publishing

Publication Date: August 2010

ISBN: 978-1-936394-02-9

Genre: Erotic Fantasy

Length: Short Story

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Rating: 3 Diamonds

Heat Level: erotic – sort of

Other: oral

Reviewer: Dana Dean

Date: August 2010

Ruth Arnison wants attention from her lover, more she wants sex, but she’s not getting either. When he reveals a secret that sends her stomping into the rain soaked day, she has no idea where she’s going or what she intends to do with her life. After a short diversion submersed in Iceland’s rugged beauty, she realizes she needs to find herself and a purpose beyond men. Can she find it while working to pay the bills and entertaining a busload of equally frustrated women?

Parts of Untouched Places were fun and so real that I could hear my friends or myself venting over lost or dumped boyfriends through the years. Grace Meadows made me smile and laugh as I jumped into this story. Why then did it only get an average rating? Typos and easily checked but still incorrect information as well as insert tab A in slot B “we had sex” “they fucked” type scenes, which lacked the description to be truly hot, kept this from sucking me in.

In addition, Untouched Places does not read as a romance. While Ms. Meadows certainly can write a tale that will make readers smile, there are far too many stories in these few pages for any of the characters to truly develop beyond a glimpse. If you are looking for a bit of true romance I’d say pass. However, if a little fun and couple wild, though somewhat emotionless romps, are what you need then this is a perfect afternoon read.

1 comment:

  1. 聰明人之所以不會成功,是因為他們缺乏了堅忍的毅力。.................................................



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